
The bouquet…. It stood there fresh and delicate, the red tulips faintly moving to the silent rhythm of the breeze. There were about twenty- twenty five of them, her favorite flowers, with tiny white ones outlining the same. There were thin silver glittering ribbons that made the beautiful bunch look lovelier. A sound from behind her head repeated for the millionth time. It was him. It WAS him. IT WAS HIM? How could it be??
Her brain was all fuzzy and eyes, welled up. She took the bouquet inside and she placed it on the dining table. Something dropped out of it… It was a small postcard.
Anahita…
Dear Love, thy name is hope.
I thank my God every time I remember you.
And I live because you live within me.
:-)
And you thought l forgot…
Our first valentine after marriage…
Happy Valentine’s Day!
P.S: Something’s waiting for you - Your Cupboard – Top Shelf
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About a month ago - A telephonic conversation
“But we don’t do flowers, yaar. I TOLD you. Only couriers!!!”
“Relax! Mickey, dude, I don’t think it’s a difficult task ok. Please, it’s for my wife, man. Don’t worry, I’ll treat you to two jugs of beer. Ok make it three…”
“Alright, alright. You and your emotional hailstorm. I’ll ask my man to deliver the flowers. Happy?”
“That’s my man!! Chal, jot down the message … Yeah... Ready?... Ok here goes… Anahita… A-N-A-H-I-T-A... Dear Love...”
“Yeah… yeah... hmmm… Wow... Not bad at all Mr. Romeo! Heheh… What time. 10.30 morning na?
“Duh! Obviously, you idiot! Ok sorry baba. Just as I told you… deliver this sharp at 10. 30 a.m., when I’ll be in the bathroom pretending to take a bath… okay… She’ll receive the flowers… Then she’ll reach for her cupboard and find the surprise waiting for her there… and then for the most romantic climax….”
“And what if the plan fails?”
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Her fingers trembled as she opened her cupboard. Standing on her toes, she reached for the shelf and searched with her hand, while scanning the place mentally. Nothing… just winter clothes that she normally stacked in the uppermost pocket of the cupboard. Her hand moved to the corner and felt something – a packet? She pulled it out. It was a small Shoppers Stop poly bag. There was a box inside it. She flipped it open.
Her face bore no expression, for, it was frozen with disbelief. Suddenly everything was hazy. Tears blinded her vision. She blinked and let the drops fall on her cheeks. She started weeping abruptly and then stopped to laugh crazily. Next moment, she was incredibly irate.. she grit her teeth and trembled violently. Flinging the box out of her hand, she shrieked, “This is unfair!!!! Unfair… UNFAIR UNFAIR!!!!!!”, and broke down into painful sobs…“Why? Why did you leave me alone???”
The box toppled over the bed and fell with a plop on the ground. Inside, from a red velvet case, rolled out a diamond ring... and a note attached to it flew up in the air. It read:
“Keep me as the apple of the eye; hide me under the shadow of your wings…
Anahita… Marry me… again.”
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“…when she would be least expecting it, I would emerge from the bathroom and surprise her by repeating the lines myself!”
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Death is a horrifying stranger. She who comes in without a knock on the door...
41 comments:
you leave me lost... transfixed... with goosebumps all over...
@Marvin: Wow! Really? Thats what a maths question paper does to me!
Heh... ;)
Thanks buddy...
crabbie, you are good, but not so good as a maths paper!!! :P
@MArvin: :D LoL! Point taken, dost!
I have goosebumps ashen...you have jolted me totally...
bows...
Respect.
Scribblers Inc.
interesting... touching... like i said, reminded me of teh movie so not very surprising, but lovely nonetheless!! lucky how for some people love outlives death, while some unfortunate people dont get to experience it even once in their lifetime!
@Scribblers Inc: Oh thanks for dropping by, Scribbler. Im genuinely honoured.. elated..:)
@Adi: :) Thanks... When you told me there was a book and a movie with the same kind of story, the whole idea felt deflated. I could not resist to read the back cover of the book P.S I... at crosswords last week, thinking of what you had told me. And frankly felt a little green when i discovered the story was not very new alright.
But Hey! All great beings think alike! Right? Hehehe... ;)
Thanks for dropping by and the encouragement!
Damn! you could have just let it be another lovey dovey story ya! Awesome though...!
@Nikki: Aw... Umm.. actually, its the story that first occured to me! So i quickly jotted it down lest i forgot all of it thanks to the rate at which my grey cells are getting eroded! ;)
Next time more lovey dovey.. piromish!
Thanks for dropping by again!
hey you... are you always this gooseyyy bumpy??? :D
@Seher: LoL! Goosey.. No. Bumpy.. Umm.. (Heh!) Cant say...
I dint really intend giving goosebumps to the readers.. just happened i guess..
The story captures a feeling of a fresh wound being opened. Maybe that sounds a little saddistic. But it was more as an ode for those who fall hopelessly in love and the destiny outwits them...
I have no words...am numb ...how beautifully you portrayed...
great i really wish you write a book ...please
hope you are doing fine
tc
regards
sayani
@Sayani: Oh thanks so much! :) As for a book, well im just good at these short stories ok.. dont have the patience to write a book!
But thanks so much for the encouragement dear...
Excellent stuff.
really good...
keep them coming..
wishes...
:) Thanks so much, MIP.
i have ample of those fresh ones! :)
Oh dear... Thats not good. Then you would surely know what i mean... Thank God you choose to keep a cheerful disposition despite all your woes... :) Bless you for that!
Hauntingly good. Sorry if I am repeating myself but absolutely loved the way you wrote the whole story. Your words did bring the whole story to life :)
@Ricky: Thanks a tonne, my friend. and a warm welcome to the Crab's blog.. :)
well, u shud ve told me about the next part getting published already in ur blog;)
it's unbelievable how much can the human heart endure and suffer... life never fails to surprise and shock us, sometimes both together.
It's always good to be aware of how much life can wound you, at the same time challenging us to move on...
Am sure you ve had a tough time etching out succha painful story, hats off!:)
@Khamakha: Sorrie!! And thanks so much dear...
True its unimaginable, the kind of trauma that life inflicts on people. But such is the nature of human that she/he unbelievabely endures all pain and suffering. God knows how anyone gets all that strength. Nai?
Thanks for dropping by again! :)
update please...
moving...
you create emotions with words..
strong, unshakeable, REAL emotions...
man that was good...
stirring is the word
@Beauty and the Beast: Welcome back!! Thanks so much dear... Glad that you found time to drop by...:)
@Gaurav: Thanks so much!.. And where have you been? Long Time!!
how do you manage?
huh huh huh :P
bravo!
:D
hey ashen...so beautiful man...so true...you touched my heart u did!! :)
beautiful...
vyo
I somehow feel that the biggest accomplishment that any writer would like to achieve is to make his/her readers feel the way he/she does about things. You just did that exactly leaving me with goose bumps and one or two tears. For the people who might not know you might ask you this "Is it a real story”... Please let it not be true. Awesome write-up.. I jus sat glued to it till the end :)
Update please?
@Seher: :) Just like you do, dear.. Hope youv been good...
@Vyo: Thanks so much! And a warm welcome to my blog... :)
@Skullz: My pleasure that you liked it buddy.. Thanks so much for all the encouragement... :)
@Nikki: In some time dear.. for sure! Was on a long bad break..
Now what about a mystery story???...
:)
what a post!
my gOD!
i see you following me on http://eternitycallsus.blogspot.com
i am pleased to announce that i have moved!
please note the new url:
http://whenhekissesher.wordpress.com
where's you missy?? Your absence is being felt rather strongly...
@B&B: Oh hii there! Just came back from a short trip to Gods own country... am trying to get back to my writing asap.. its been two long months now! i swear...
Beautiful.
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